Allan's monologue

In this lesson, we had decided to show the other group a small part of our play. We had decided that we would perform this part as it had most of us in it and also they hadn't seen it before. When looking at my character in this, I feel as if he is maybe too quiet at some points and comes across a bit camp when saying "By and Irishman". So a way that I can try to improve this is by maybe projecting a bit louder and also maybe making sure that everything I do has a purpose to it to make sure I don't then end up walking around a lot or just sitting in my chair for ages listening to the conversations that occur in the scene.